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About Me Member Traditional Artist JarreckMale/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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Ultimate Sonic Update #2

Tue Jul 14, 2009, 10:51 AM
Well the first page of Ultimate Sonic the Hedgehog was posted last week, unfortunately after talking to a few people about the quality of my comic I realized I put it out way too quickly and relied too much on photoshop and not enough on my OWN abilities as an artist to make the comic. Now the story has been nearly completely overhauled and I've reposted the first page of the comic(The old page I am still going to keep but I'm calling it the Pilot page and it is non relevant with the rest of my webcomic).

PAGE 1 NOTES:

The Altered Story:

You'll notice if you've been keeping up with my story ideas at all that I have completely changed the origin of the Mobians. Now it's a bit less complicated but, still very different than what you're use to. The meteor that struck the earth millions of years ago is the ultimate version of the Master Emerald. When it hit our planet it began slowly changing life on our planet and now in the year 2500, a mysterious entity somehow accelerated the effects of the Meteor tremendously in an event that was called: "The Great Change" by many. Most of the animal population on our planet evolved into a new species of person called Mobians by the scientist Dr.Calvin Mobius. These Mobians would live in some persecution for a few years by humans but, eventually would ease into human society. A city was created for Mobian culture and society to flourish called: "Mobius" also named after the scientist Dr.Calvin.

LINKS:

The New First Page:
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:iconfoxclawwg:
Mostly, I think you should look at some anatomy more and try to simplify your designs. Most of them look too busy to know what we're looking at and designs of existing characters look ragged and unclear of who they are (without having to look for their trademarks or characteristics).

For the stories. Most don't really make since. An example for Sonic would be in the beginning on page 1, if there are no humans the how can they say "non-human" if they don't exist? Wouldn't they be un-knowledgeable of them?

It's really the look that turns me away from looking at the other pics, just needs to be more simple instead of over doing the line work and making it hard to know who it is you're trying to draw. Honestly the only character I could see right away was Rouge, but even that wasn't really much to me...

Just practice more and I'll be looking forward to seeing your comic(s)

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:iconpiratewolf87:
I think your art is awesome :hug:

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:iconjarreck:
thank you

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:iconpiratewolf87:
your welcome *smiles* So how was your summer?

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:iconpiratewolf87:
I know what you mean, sometimes I wish I accomplished more during the summer than just watching late
shows.

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:iconjarreck:
It was allright. Went by quick

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:iconjarreck:
Hey guys I'd appreciate comments on my art if you will. Whether positive(prefferably positive heh heh) or negative it helps me grow as an artist so thanks

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:iconrinxue:
Welcome to DeviantART!!! :glomp:

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:iconjarreck:
Hey thanks for all the comments guys. As much as I love drawing(and I do alot) I'd really like to pursue a career as a comic book illustrator. I know it's a bit geeky but, it's what I like.
:iconlirael182:
welcome to dA

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