Well the first page of Ultimate Sonic the Hedgehog was posted last week, unfortunately after talking to a few people about the quality of my comic I realized I put it out way too quickly and relied too much on photoshop and not enough on my OWN abilities as an artist to make the comic. Now the story has been nearly completely overhauled and I've reposted the first page of the comic(The old page I am still going to keep but I'm calling it the Pilot page and it is non relevant with the rest of my webcomic).
PAGE 1 NOTES:
The Altered Story:
You'll notice if you've been keeping up with my story ideas at all that I have completely changed the origin of the Mobians. Now it's a bit less complicated but, still very different than what you're use to. The meteor that struck the earth millions of years ago is the ultimate version of the Master Emerald. When it hit our planet it began slowly changing life on our planet and now in the year 2500, a mysterious entity somehow accelerated the effects of the Meteor tremendously in an event that was called: "The Great Change" by many. Most of the animal population on our planet evolved into a new species of person called Mobians by the scientist Dr.Calvin Mobius. These Mobians would live in some persecution for a few years by humans but, eventually would ease into human society. A city was created for Mobian culture and society to flourish called: "Mobius" also named after the scientist Dr.Calvin.
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The New First Page:
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For the stories. Most don't really make since. An example for Sonic would be in the beginning on page 1, if there are no humans the how can they say "non-human" if they don't exist? Wouldn't they be un-knowledgeable of them?
It's really the look that turns me away from looking at the other pics, just needs to be more simple instead of over doing the line work and making it hard to know who it is you're trying to draw. Honestly the only character I could see right away was Rouge, but even that wasn't really much to me...
Just practice more and I'll be looking forward to seeing your comic(s)
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"Everything that ever was shall never be..."
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The Pirate Code is more like guild-lines, than the actual rules.
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The logic of life and death dictates our lives.-me
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The Pirate Code is more like guild-lines, than the actual rules.
shows.
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The Pirate Code is more like guild-lines, than the actual rules.
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The logic of life and death dictates our lives.-me
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The logic of life and death dictates our lives.-me
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-= All Others Will Be Toads =-
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Female Student: [Walking out of dorm] Is it raining?
Paris: [Walking into dorm, soaking wet] No, it's National Baptism Day. Tie your tubes, idiot.
And that's why I love Gilmore Girls
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